First Time: The Test

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waiting for test results in a Denny's bathroom

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Author: purple people eater
Time: 7:20
Plays: 37
Reactions: 2
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foxen27
Recorded:
2008
Groups: FIRST TIME CONTEST
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"The Test" (I give it a big red +!)

To me, the dialogue feels really natural, which isn't easy to accomplish. Plus, the pacing of the story is strong, as it moves back and forth through time and space. (Not the actual vocals, but the way the story unfolds.)

To the Author/Peformer:I'm jealous of your work. :)

Published June 13th, 2008 by littlelightningbug
I am dieing to know...

I'm dieing to know what happened!!
Brilliant story, it reminds me of Carver's style at the end. Great work, thanks!

Published May 19th, 2008 by Stefano