Butterfly Kisses
An unsuitable-for-children-and-work story of my first love, and the origins of my fondness for cunnilingus.
Well, damn. This certainly turned me on, but some of the language, especially during the sex, was a bit too blunt to make it really hot (euphimisms are cheesy in regular stories, but in a reading, they really help to keep the feeling, especially since most genital words are hard and dead). I very much liked the end and the beginning, very strong imagery, although the reading was rather flat and uninvolved.
This is explicit without being vulgar. It's intense. The honesty, innocence and vulnerability is both moving and striking. I'd like to hear about a time when you fell in love again and how the memory of your first affected that experience.
